Tuesday, May 17, 2022

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"You love me, do you?" He caught her cheek and turned her. The savagery had faded from his hard features, but his eyes were still as light and cold as winter frost. "Little girl," he mocked. "You love this---" He moved his hand between her thighs, and Roddy drew in her breath. "You love the devil's touch, cailian sidhe. Not the devil." 


Could do w/out "Little girl" :/ But this has improved since beginning 10%
Faelan had me noting how caring he was with Roddy, mostly in regards to age difference (35,19) life experience but then he flashes to '80s bodice ripper hero/self-published mafia boss in a blink of an eye. It's making me reading this in 2022 see him as incredibly immature.

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