The author and editor showed all the way up making this one of the best tightly constructed stories, especially since there are time jumps and character pov changes happening frequently!, I've read for a while.
Hoping the second half lives up to the first and Bonnie's journey doesn't end in total heartbreak
High praise indeed! Fingers crossed it works out for you all the way through.
ReplyDeleteUsually you can point out growth areas for authors and lack of editing but this first half was so finely tuned I had to comment on it
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