Monday, October 3, 2022

50%

 


It's good being the horror chick, sure, always standing away from the rest of the crowd, smoking bitter cigarette after bitter cigarette, she'd have it no other way, but it's nice to make eye contact with someone else with a black heart, too, and then breathe smoke out slow, like judgement.

Sunday, October 2, 2022

Reading Update: Page 1

 



May be the last 70s day for me for a while, so Sunday afternoon shrimp tacos and since it's October, horror! 
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The two sides of my personality are romance books and horror movies. 
This story has a horror movie loving lead and I can't wait to catch all the movie references. 

Happy spooktober! ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ 




Saturday, October 1, 2022

Review: The Undertaking of Hart and Mercy

The Undertaking of Hart and Mercy The Undertaking of Hart and Mercy by Megan Bannen
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

3.5 stars 

I received this book for free, this does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review. 

“Hello, Hart-ache,” she sighed. 
“Hello, Merciless.” 

The Undertaking of Hart and Mercy was a light fantasy romance with a touch of macabre that was heavily influenced (and borrowed directly from) by the movie You've Got Mail. It's a world that has Old and New Gods in their religion and Mercy Birdsall lives in the outer-reaches in Bushong trying to keep her family's undertaking business afloat. Think a barren, old west kind of town but add in fantasy and a touch of diesel punk as portals can open the Mist which walls off the land of Tanria. Tanria was created by the New Gods to imprison the Old Gods a thousand years ago but eventually the Old Gods were allowed to take their place in the stars. Twenty-five years ago the portals were invented and humans were able to enter Tanria, making the need for Marshalls. Drudges (think zombies) are created when souls that didn't get transported to their afterlife attack a human and inhabit, through the appendix, the now dead body. Drudges can't go through the mist but pirate portals, criminals illegally coming into Tanria to poach or try to steal the lands resources leave an opening for them and they end up on the human side and attack there, becoming a dangerous problem. Hart Ralston has been a Marshall for nineteen years and sees the drudges becoming an even bigger problem lately and it's causing him to have to see his least favorite undertaker more and more. 

He had written a letter to no one, but someone had written back. And he liked this someone. 

When I first started reading this, I felt extremely lost in the world, drudges, autoduck, equimares, and the whole religion with key IDs are relayed to the reader without much explanation. I kept thinking that I needed a primer about the world before I started but at around 30%, Hart gets an apprentice, Pen, who works to bring out explanations about Tanria and the world as Hart is teaching him, thus the reader. The thread that works to hold the story together is humans are given keys, these are like soul birth certificates. When someone dies, their key tells what undertaker they wanted taken to and how they want their body taken care of. There seems to be some Viking mythology here with viking like boats built for the bodies and funeral pyres. Drudges usually don't have keys and with the government giving special deals to undertakers to take on these burial services, Birdsall and Son, a struggling undertaking business, takes a lot of these on. This causes Hart to frequent Birdsall and Son more than the higher end Cunninghams. This plot gets Marshall Hart and Mercy Birdsall together as her brother Zeddie doesn't want to become an undertaker, their father had a heart attack and can't handle the work load, and Mercy's sister goes with her husband on deliveries. 

“You're one of those hard-on-the-outside, marshmallow-on-the-inside types.” 

When Hart first meet Mercy four years ago, he was having a bad day and kind of took his bad attitude out on her, even though he thought she was beautiful. Mercy dresses like a 1950s pin-up and is very tall but since Hart is a demi-god, he's even taller and Mercy has her own physical attraction to him but can't help giving him attitude back. They're both lonely but too blinded by their years of animosity to truly look at one another. Fortunately, Hart was having a hard lonely night and decided to pour his thoughts into a letter that he didn't address to anyone and dropped it into a nimkilim box. Add nimkilim to autoducks (cars?) and equimares (horse-frogs?) that aren't fully explained but it's the world's mail service with talking owls, rabbits, and other animals that serve as the mail deliverers. There's a few letters back and forth with insecurities, hopes, and feelings to draw Hart and Mercy to each other, we get a full chapter of the letters back and forth, and we get a secret romance forming between enemies. 

I think we should meet. 

It's around 40% that Hart learns he's writing to Mercy and there's a little bit of a meltdown but when Mercy has a near death experience and Hart rescues her, he lets himself feel those feelings he developed from their letter writing friendship. Mercy suddenly giving into her physical attraction to Hart was a little harder to go along with because she doesn't know he's the letter writer and so the emotional connection wasn't quite there for me from her. About halfway we start to leave the fantasy world aspects and move more into the characters as Hart starts to deal with his emotional pains of losing his mother young, never knowing his father, grieving his dog and mentor Bill, trying to connect again with his friend and now boss Alma, and allowing himself to love Mercy. This was an adult romance and we get an open door to the bedroom. 

“Why are you being nice to me all of a sudden?” 
“Maybe the better question to ask is, why were we so mean to each other to begin with?” 

When Mercy and Hart were together and the romance between them was the focus, I thought the story flowed the best. The fantasy world aspects weren't as flushed out as they could have been, it made the world feel a little messy. Hart's demi-god aspects, healing quickly, being able to see souls, and question if he's immortal or not, the question of why more drudges are suddenly showing up, and Mercy's business struggles with competitors Cunninghams, eventually tie-in together but the Cunninghams whole plot thread was too much to the side for most of the story for me to really care about in the end, especially when you add in some of the criminal “mafiosi” aspects. 

“Be careful.” 
“I always am.” 
“But now you need to be careful for me.” 

Side characters like Mercy's family and Hart's friends did add some warmth to the story but they were mostly one-dimensional. Mercy being mad at her family for not understanding she did love the business felt way too drawn out because she never told them she loved the business, letting them think she was forced into doing it. I liked how this was finally an adult fantasy romance but for Mercy being thirty and Hart thirty-six, they did not read those ages to me, they came off more early, mid-twenties; cursing and having open door sex does not an adult character make. I also had some problems reading Hart as a defining character, his voice didn't read that much different from Pen's. The ending gave us some answers about Hart and while there was a high emotion moment, I'm not sure I really got there because of how this felt lighter and skimming on the top of deeper emotions. The epilogue felt more like a happily ever after for Hart instead of Hart and Mercy because their romance was eclipsed by a family finally for Hart. This had a lot of ambitious, wild, and fun fantasy aspects but I'm not sure they all gelled and came tightly all together. This didn't quite hit the depth of emotions for me but I loved it for trying something new in adult fantasy romance and having it's sweet and zombie moments.

Thursday, September 29, 2022

Reading Update: Page 1

 



Spooky romance! 
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I'm so excited to start this fantasy, paranormal romance. Hart is a marshal patrolling to keep out reanimated corpses and Mercy is trying to keep her undertaker family business afloat. 

Hart and Mercy don't like each other but have unwittingly become pen pals who are growing closer. 
A little enemies-to-lovers and letter writing! 

Happy spooky reading season! 



Review: The Halloween Tree

The Halloween Tree The Halloween Tree by Ray Bradbury
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

4.5 stars 

For the Tree was hung with a variety of pumpkins of every shape and size and a number of tints and hues of smoky yellow or bright orange. “A pumpkin tree,” someone said. “No,” said Tom. The wind blew among the high branches and tossed their bright burdens, softly. “A Halloween Tree,” said Tom. 

I ended up really loving this! It was a fast paced flight of fancy with just the right amount of light spookiness. The story starts off with eight boys, dressed in different costumes, skeleton, witch, gargoyle, etc. Although we do get all the boys' names, their pov is mostly led by Tom Skelton. The exuberance of the boys is felt as they set off to go trick or treating. 

The house beckoned with its towers, invited with its gummed-shut doors. Pirate ships are a tonic. Ancient forts are a boon. But a house, a haunted house, on All Hallows’ Eve? Eight small hearts beat up an absolute storm of glory and approbation. 

Their Halloween night was planned with a haunted house visit when they realize their fun leader, Pipkin is missing. They stop at his house and he comes out holding his side, looking pale, and obviously not feeling well. They're worried but also thirteen year old boys and when Pipkin says he's fine, they take off running to start their night as Pipkin says he'll catch up. 

For coming up out of the pile of leaves was a bony white hand, all by itself. And following it, all smiles, hidden one moment but now revealed as it slid upward, was a white skull. 

At the house, the door is answered by a creepy man who says trick instead of treat and their attention gets drawn to the tree in the yard. It has hundreds of pumpkins that seem to come alive and a Halloween song is sung that I wish was on Amazon music so I could play it on Halloween. There are a couple other songs in this and the writing style overall has a musical beat to it that I thought held the fast pace really well. After the song, a skeleton being rises out of a pile leaves (very Jake Skellington-ish sounding) and when a Dark Something steals away Pipkin who finally makes an appearance, asks them if the boys want to go on an adventure to save Pipkin and learn what Halloween means. Who could say no?? 

“All the more reason for you to come along, lads. If we fly fast, maybe we can catch Pipkin. Grab his sweet Halloween corn-candy soul. Bring him back, pop him in bed, toast him warm, save his breath. What say, lads? Would you solve two-mysteries-in-one? Search and seek for lost Pipkin, and solve Halloween, all in one fell dark blow?”

Is there a harder hitting line for the month of October than “Grab his sweet Halloween corn-candy soul.”?? NO. The boys are game and fly off with the being calling himself Mr. Moundshroud. This is probably where the story loses some readers, the boys fly back in history to the time of the Egyptian pyramids. Pipkin is the mummy being put into the sarcophagus! This trend continues as the boys are flown by Mr. Moundshroud to Greece, Italy, England, France, and Mexico. Pipkin is at turns a mummy, dog, and knocker, each time the boys learning about the origins of Halloween and how it has morphed and been shaped by the time period and culture celebrating it. It was a little lesson on hows and whys of humans creating their own mythos. I also liked how each of the boys' costumes was a small representation of the different periods and cultural tie-ins; the gargoyle fit with Notre Dame, the witch for the Druid ceremony. There was also a line when Mr. Moundshroud was talking about prehistoric humans and how in their understanding “ghosts” came about, Memories, that’s what ghosts are, that I thought was touching. 

“But, stop and think. What does the word ‘witch’ truly mean?” 
“Why—” said Tom, and was stymied. 
“Wits,” said Moundshroud. “Intelligence. That’s all it means. Knowledge. So any man , or woman, with half a brain and with inclinations toward learning had his wits about him, eh? And so, anyone too smart, who didn’t watch out, was called—” 
“A witch!” said everyone. 

When they got to their last destination, Mexico, around 60% I did think the loose, somewhat chaotic dancing style and pace was starting to need more structure but the adding in of more emotion to talking about and having the boys discover El Dia de los Muertos made up for some of the wildness. This is where their journey to save Pipkin comes to ahead as he's trapped in a catacomb and the little darkness that was emitting from Mr. Moundshroud rears its head. As with many a journey, friendships are tested, prices are paid, and we are given an ending that fit the learning, fun, spooky, and at times dark tone. 

“Well,” asks Moundshroud at journey’s end, “which was it? A Trick or a Treat?” 
“Both!” all agree. 

This is a story I could see myself reading every October, it's short, fast paced, fun, and brings some spooky vibes. The sing-song writing style and chaotic structure won't be for some but I'm wanting to add the Halloween Tree song to my playlist.

Wednesday, September 28, 2022

Review: The Hellion and the Hero

The Hellion and the Hero The Hellion and the Hero by Emily Sullivan
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

2.5 stars 

I received this book for free, this does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review. 

As a lieutenant in the Royal Navy, Henry Harris went to London to marry an heiress. He hoped that would help him take care of his mother and sister and keep him out of the clutches of Naval Intelligence. When he meets Miss Georgiana Fox on a balcony, they have an instant connection and as his friend Tobias' mother is Georgiana's godmother, they get to have time together. However, when Henry learns that Georgiana is going for a title and accepts a viscount's proposal, Georgiana overhears him saying less than favorable things about her and she spreads the rumor that he is only fortune hunting. Georgiana becomes a viscountess, Lady Arlington, and Henry leaves without getting married. Six years later, Georgiana's husband dies, Henry is now Captain Harris and touted a hero for trying to rescue two young Englishmen and escaping a Turkish prison. It takes another year and a half to get these two together though, when Georgiana's brother Reginald goes to Harris Investigations and wants to hire Henry to investigate threats against Georgiana. 

The heat from his palm slowly sank into her skin and trailed down her arm. 

The Hellion and the Hero is book three in A League of Scoundrels series and while we did get a few looks at Georgiana and Henry in the second book (The Rebel and the Rake) and that book's couple makes a bit of a prolonged appearance in this, new readers to the series could still start here. This started out having Henry worried for Georgiana's safety and obviously still having unresolved feelings from their attraction eight years ago. For the most part, Georgiana brushes off the sense of danger from the threatening notes she's gotten and confronting a man who was following her. After her husband's death, she's been put in charge of two garment factories that were a part of her dowry. She's become a reformist and changed the game by creating safe working condition and fair, living wages. This has angered her competitors as they're losing workers to her and causing strife in their factories. She's being threatened to not sign a contract for a new factory and expanding her business. 

Georgiana's heart suddenly ached with years of useless regret. 

It's the start of a good plot, brings Henry in, gives them a reason to be together, and delivers a sense of danger adding to the tension but the plot thins out as the story goes along in favor of hit elements that the author seemed to want to put in. Kind of inexplicably, when the danger ramps up against Georgiana, it's decided that she should get out of London and go to Monte Carlo. I was excited, because what a setting change, but it doesn't make a lot sense how traveling there would equal more safety for Georgiana. I know she's going to meet a friend there but wouldn't that endanger her friend and make it harder to protect her? Then it's even harder to go along with when the setting of Monte Carlo wasn't fully utilized; they gamble once and it was for only two-ish pages. The glitz, glamour, and atmosphere of Monte Carlo was delivered in the newness of using a lift and Georgiana playing the piano again. It was hard not to be disappointed in the scene change not delivering. It did work to put Georgiana and Henry together in a hotel to make it easier for them to get it on and, nicely, they didn't disappoint here. This was open door (or should I say open carriage and bathtub?) and I liked the heat level here. They didn't have the emotional connection to totally have these scenes hit for me but they brought some heat. 

His eyes were full of hunger. Interest. Desire. 

In second chance romance, I often talk about miss seeing the couple fall in love. The beginning had Georgiana and Henry remembering their first moment meeting and then other moments together in their individual point-of-views. I really liked this, it worked to give us flashbacks to “see” but didn't info dump with longer flashbacks that I know some don't like. They do go on for the first half and I thought this was a little too long and also set-up the characters to be too much in their own heads. Georgiana and Henry are together a good amount of the story but there seemed to be more interacting with each other in their own heads instead of talking with each other and I missed some of their emotional connection because of this. 

His jaw tightened as his gaze bore into her own. 
“You'll have to be quiet.” 
“I can,” she promised, already a little breathless. 
His hand cupped the nape of her neck and drew her closer. “I'm going to test you on that.” 

In Monte Carlo, the Commodore who got Henry into spying (Naval Intelligence), tries to get him back in the game by threatening Georgiana and telling Henry he'll tell him who is behind her attacks is Henry comes back to service. The Commodore isn't really around long enough to feel like too much of a danger and while he even approaches Georgiana about Henry, they both kind of put him to the side. Georgiana decides she needs to go back to London to hurry and sign the contract for her new building and we get a last 10% that reveals the villain behind the threats, Georgiana and Henry learn how they misunderstood each other's intentions when they first met, and the eventual coming together. 

This man she had once thought could be her future. And perhaps still was. 

The plot of Georgiana being in danger because of her reformist attitude in running her factories was thinly there but this felt more like wanted elements added, reformist heroine, Monte Carlo, threats, and then plot added around those elements, instead of plot creating the elements. Georgiana and Henry seemed too in their heads a fair amount of the time and I missed them interacting with each other with talking back and forth more, the romance was missing that strong emotional pull for me. I did like the heat level but the overall story just didn't quite get there for me. If you liked the couple from the previous book though, Sylvie and Rafe spend a lot of time with them in Monte Carlo and sort of get a tiny little epilogue that will make fans happy.

Tuesday, September 27, 2022

Reading Update: Page 1

 



The title, the hand over heart on bare skin, the chin dipped down. Have mercy on us poor historical romance readers! ๐Ÿ˜ 

A second chance romance with a widow who has found her strength and a naval captain hero that can't get her out of his mind. 
This sounds so good! 

I almost don't care about the pizza I made for lunch. 
Almost ๐Ÿ˜‰ 




Review: A Table for Two

A Table for Two A Table for Two by Sheryl Lister
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

2.5 stars 

Breathe, girl. I am not going to fall for this man. 

Six years ago after having her heart broken by her over critical boyfriend, Serenity moved to the town of Firefly Lake in California. A nurse who wanted to escape the fast pace of the ER, Serenity now works in an office. She also hosts the semimonthly Serenity's Supper Club, where she and her four friends, Andrea, Dana, Natasha, and Terri get together over drinks and the chef quality food Serenity cooks up. When Serenity's friend and neighbor Andrea gets a promotion and has to move, her brother from Atlanta decides to stay at her place to help watch over their nana. Gabriel only plans on staying a few months, he wants to convince his grandmother to move to Atlanta, but when he meets Serenity, he's gaining a new outlook on life. 

He'd never missed a woman---never missed kissing a woman---before, but he had with her. 

A Table for Two was a very low angst foodie lovers dream story that had Serenity learning to trust again and Gabriel figuring out what he truly wanted out of life. Serenity's baggage from her last relationship had her extra sensitive to a few comments Gabriel made at first, which had them starting off on a slightly growly foot. For the most part, Gabriel took her attitude in stride and as they were put together more, neighbors, small-town run-ins, and supper club dinners, the not trusting intentions eased and attraction tension replaced it. Gabriel was a workaholic, who had some pain still popping up from his parents fatal car accident eight years ago. He owned a tech company with some friends and was a software engineer who had his friends demanding he learn to balance his work and play schedule better. Serenity learning to trust Gabriel's true intentions and Gabriel learning that he maybe didn't need the big city life was the low angst keeping these two apart. 

Gabriel was falling fast, and he had no idea what to do about it. 

Serenity and Gabriel's relationship had a nice steady pace to it, by 15% any misunderstanding to Gabriel's first remarks has been cleared up, 30% they've kissed, 40% they start to date, and at 60% they're in the open door bedroom. Their relationship was the steady ride through a story supported by love of food, friendships, and family relationships. Gabriel and his nana have great scenes together, I would have liked even more of them together, and it was obviously loving how he came to realize how he couldn't uproot her from her life in Firefly Lake. One of the big highlights of the story was the friendships. Serenity with her supper club friends had great talks and Gabriel with his friends that he owned the software business with, had great supportive relationships. These interactions and scenes rounded out Serenity and Gabriel's characters and filled out the story and world the author had created. It added color to the picture and leaves the reader with matchmaking ideas for some in the friendship group. 

She'd been falling for him since the first kiss, and she was in danger of losing the one thing she'd vowed never to give away again---her heart. 

Serenity came with the cooking skills but Gabriel was no slacker. He took Serenity on a wine tour, brought her to a concert, mowed her grass, and showed off his own cooking. Gabriel was the whole package with the romancing and supporting, giving Serenity what she needed when it was needed; a sexy competence hero. The last ten percent felt rushed with a proposal that felt kind of quick and didn't quite stick the emotional landing for me. I did think the last half started to lose some of its steam but I lean more on the side of drama angst and this was definitely very low level, so my drifting disinterest was tied to that aspect. This was an amiable story that showcased friendships, love of food, and a romance that just need to trust and realize the important things in life.

Wednesday, September 21, 2022

Review: A Court of Thorns and Roses

A Court of Thorns and Roses A Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J. Maas
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

3.5 stars 

*This is a TBRChallenge review, there will be spoilers, I don't spoil everything but enough, because I treat these reviews as a bookclub discussion. 

September is my Random Number Generator month and what a doozy it picked out for me. I'm also playing Halloween Bingo and read this for the Monster square (fae monsters galore in this) and since Tamlin is a shapeshifter, he can turn into a animal beast, it also worked for this month's TBRChallenge – Animals. A triple threat read! 

But despite his size, he looked like a wolf, moved like a wolf. Animal, I reassured myself. Just an animal. 

This takes place in a Medieval-ish fantasy land where Fae live in the land called Prythian and five hundred years ago a war was waged between Fae and human until a Treaty was signed and a wall put up between the lands. The wall is not supposed to be crossed. Human Feyre is out hunting when she sees a wolf, that she thinks could possibly be Fae. Feyre doesn't have good feelings towards the Fae as they are rumored to be monsters and deceivers and knowing how much the pelt will bring in for her family, she kills the wolf, who seems to just let her. Feyre's family has been in poverty for eight years when her father's merchant business went belly up. Her father mopes around and her two sisters Nesta and Elain are either too busy being bitter and hateful (Nesta) or a little head in the clouds (Elain). So the hunting and work all falls to Feyre, who would actually like to just paint all day, because of a promise she made to her mother on her mother's deathbed to take care of the family. 

The beast had to be as large as a horse, and while his body was somewhat feline, his head was distinctly wolfish. I didn't know what to make of the curled, elk-like horns that protruded from his head. But lion or hound or elk, there was no doubting the damage his black, dagger like claws and yellow fangs could inflict. 

After killing the wolf, a monstrous fae shows up raging at Feyre's home and demanding to know who killed his friend. Feyre owns up to it and the beast claims that due to the Treaty, he can kill Feyre in retaliation or force her to go back to Prythian with him to live out her days. The beast forces her to come back to his home and we learn that the beast is Tamlin, a High Fae and the High Lord of the Spring Court. There are seven Fae courts, link the seasons and day and night. This all happens in the beginning ten percent and I couldn't help feeling the world wasn't quite flushed out enough for me to fully grasped what was going on. This seems to be by design, though. The story is all told from Feyre's point-of-view, the reader only knows what she does and as she spends more time with Tamlin and his emissary, Lucien, she and the reader begin to realize that the full story isn't being told. Tamlin and Lucien constantly wear golden masks on the top half of their faces. They tell her that a Blight has infected the land diminishing fae power and cursed the fae of the Spring Court to forever wear the masquerade masks they had been wearing the night of a ball 49 years ago. Monster fae, puca, bogge, suriel, nagga, etc. are starting to creep out of their own lands and reek havoc on the seven courts. 

“I smelled you,” he breathed, his painted chest rising and falling so close to mine. “I searched for you, and you weren't there.” 

After Feyre captures a suriel, gets some more information about Tamlin, and then Tamlin has to save her from some other monster fae, her instant hatred of him starts to shift, around 35%. We get them starting to talk more and Feyre starts painting. (Does this painting thing of Feyre's come back later in the series? Otherwise it felt kind of pointless?) Their friendship and attraction starts to grow. The fae have a holiday celebration that includes Tamlin needed to bang someone so crops grow (ok, what man made up this holiday??? lol) and the sexual heat/attraction grows between the two. So does the questions Feyre has, she starts to eavesdrop and hear some things being said between Tamlin and Lucien that don't totally make sense. 

“My wings,” the faerie choked out, his glossy black eyes wide and staring at nothing. “She took my wings.” 

Tamlin comes back one night with a gravely injured fae and this was the best scene in the book, written visually stunning and I felt the heightened emotion of Tamlin's pain and anger along with with Feyre's confusion and finally seeing the fae as more than just monsters. 
“Lucien,” Tamlin said, quiet command. But Lucien kept gaping at the fae's ruined back, at the stumps, his metal eye narrowing and widening, narrowing and widening. He backed up a step. And another. And then vomited in a potted plant before sprinting from the room. The faerie twisted again and I held tight, my arms shaking with the effort. His injuries must have weakened him greatly if I could keep him pinned. 
“Please,” I breathed. “Please hold still.” 
“She took my wings,” the faerie sobbed. “She took them.” 
“I know,” I murmured, my fingers aching. “I know.” 
Tamlin touched the rag to one of the stumps, and the faerie screamed so loudly that my senses guttered, sending me staggering back. He tried to rise but his arms buckled, and he collapsed face-first onto the table again. 

After this scene is when Feyre really starts to question what is going on and who “She” could be. 

“Tell me there's some way to help you,” I breathed. “With the masks, with whatever threat has taken so much of your power. Tell me, just tell me what I can do to help you.” 
“A human wishes to help a faerie?” 

Feyre and the reader then learn about a faerie kingdom, Hybern, ruled by a King that hated humans, the whole war thing, and that he was betrayed by The Deceiver. This is all around the halfway point and I felt like it was information that needed to be shared earlier, take out the whole Feyre painting thing get to this quicker. I understand keeping Feyre and thus, the reader in the dark, for the shock/lead up to the reveal of what the Blight really was but after Tamlin sends Feyre back to the human realm because he's afraid for her safety because he now cares for her, the story started to feel very info-dump-y after the 60% mark. 

“I love you,” he whispered, and kissed my brow. “Thorns and all.”

I forgot to mention in the first half Feyre was super worried over her family, how they were going to survive without her and Tamlin told her glamoured them to think she was just off caring for an aunt but he also made it seem like her father's merchant's business made a miraculous recovery and had them living in riches. When Feyre's back, she learns that the glamour didn't work on Nesta and we get some family bonding before Feyre, fairly quickly, admits she loves Tamlin and heads back to Prythian to save him. But his home is ravaged and she learns that he's been taken to Under the Mountain and under Amarantha's power. Amarantha is revealed to be the true villain, she tricked the High Lords and stole most of their power 49 years ago. The info-dump starts info-dumping, we get Amarantha's back story and we learn about the curse Tamlin is under and how Feyre could have saved him. Guilty Feyre decides to enter a deal with Amarantha and if she can solve a riddle, Tamlin and the Spring Court will be instantly free or if Feyre completes three trials she will set all the High Lords free. When I tell you this story was entertaining but a bit messy with it's plot and structure, believe me. Lol. 

“The wolf” Andras had just, stared at me before I killed him. Let me kill him. 

Time doesn't really seem to matter in this part of the story as Amarantha tortures Feyre and we get some of her trials happening whenever the author seems to remember that they need to happen. Mostly, this part seems about adding in the character Rhysand that we've only nominally seen. He's the High Lord of the Night court and mocked for being Amarantha's whore. He's mysterious and seems to be helping Feyre when he can. He also ends up saving her life after she barely survives the first trial but with a deal that tattoos her arm with his mark and that she must spend at least one week a month in the Night Court. Tamlin's around always stone faced and sitting beside Amarantha as she's trying to break him and make him sleep with her too. Anyway, those days and nights Amarantha forgets about the trials, Rhys has Feyre getting drunk and dancing for him and they seem to start to develop their own attraction. 

And I'd become High Fae. 

Finally the last trial happens and Feyre's eavesdropping comes into play and while Amarantha still doesn't seem to be playing fair, during her torturing of Feyre, Feyre realizes the answer to the riddle and breaks the curse with her answer and with Tamlin having his restored power, he kills Amarantha. Yay! After reading the whole story, I do like the world building but it was a little rough to get to it and too much info-dumping and Scooby Doo revealing at the end. The first half needed to be cleaned up in terms of cutting some pointless drag the pace down additives and repetition and maybe working in more of the reveals so they weren't all left until the end. The ending with Feyre in Under the Mountain also needed to be shored up as getting to the trials and competing should have felt more concise, timeline wise. The ending left some threads dangling, High Lords and Prythian aren't settled yet, Feyre's new identity, and there is obviously something going on with Rhys and Feyre. 


SPOILER
Ok, so I just went to read about the next in the series and then subsequent books in the series and WTF. Tamlin turns heel I guess?? What was the point of me reading 300 pgs of Tamlin and Feyre's romance?? It feels like I slogged through just so the series could have a manipulated shock and instead put Rhys and Feyre together. I'll read the next in the series but it's going to have to really do this right for me to like it. Nesta taking on Feyre's tattoo and putting Nesta and Rhys together was right there!!

Tuesday, September 20, 2022

Reading Update: Page 1

 



Finishing up the last of the corn on the cob and starting this enemies-to-lovers small-town romance. 

A supper club with friends (the food in this is going to make me drool, isn't it?) and an invited friend's brother who has foot-in-mouth syndrome because of nerves. 

Sounds like a lot of food, laughter, and attraction. 
Yummy all around!